Sells Like Hot Cakes - Critics and Brainstorming

Here you can submit your product or website (anonymously if you choose), research ideas, listings, descriptions and bullet points for the community to analyze, critique and brainstorm. You will be surprised at the ideas and tips you will receive that you never thought about, helping you instantly boost your sales and avoid costly mistakes. "Is this the right product to sell?" "How can I improve this listing title"? "How can I improve conversion from my bullet points?"

You will get invaluable ideas and tips from people who sell BIG and do this for a living!

And don't worry that other people will copy you... your competitor can copy your product anyway, whether or not you like it.

Try to adopt an abundance mindset instead of a mindset of scarcity. There is enough money and room for everyone, and there is always competition in anything, so stop worrying about it. Competition exists whether or not you worry about it; it's a part of the game!

We can achieve many more sales by helping each other rather than considering every other person to be a competitor.

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Wedding Dreams
It is a wedding store
  • Look of store
  • Setup of store
  • Products
  • If I could get feedback please, is it any good and what changes do you think I need to make?
VANESSA says at 02:20 am et
Hi this is my store and I would like to know about the setup, the look and the products that I have put in. Is it any good, are the products any good?
 
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Mike says at 02:20 et
Welcome to critics Vanessa. Let us post some suggestions
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bitmap says at 02:21 et
1.Logo colors look little off, It seems like you did logo yourself and it shows, I suggest to invest little money to hire designer for the logo. (on fiver or 99designs). The violet colors don't match your store as well
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Speedy says at 02:22 et
About us section is not working. The whole site lacks content. Add more content
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Mike says at 02:23 et
Add your story... People love to buy a good story. Why and how you got into this business. See video lessons about building credibility.
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 Lane says at 02:24 et
Many categories are still empty or have just 2 products, I suggest to start a store with at least 100 products in catalog spread over several categories
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 chris says at 02:26 et
I'm not sure if the main image of lonely chair in the woods is a good fit for the "dream" for most people. My wedding dream is a happy couple at the beach with the flowers... Check shutterstock for more ideas.
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 Dylan says at 02:27 et
Keep improving Vanessa. still a lot to do before it's ready but you are on the right track. Congratultions on getting started
1. add social proof (instagram, facebook) widgets
2. add bonuses
3. add a blog with tips how to make a perfect wedding or "top 3 mistakes when planning your wedding"
4. add a solid story and "about us" section
5. add contact section with clear terms and where and how you ship

cheers
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Shopping Inspirations
Outdoor pursuits and hobbies
  • Camping, cycling, stress toys, travel accessories
Keywords: Camping sleeping bags, tents, stress, toys
Claudia says at 07:16 am et
This is a inspiration store in which i have the theme of motivation and leisure, such as outdoor pursuits, stress related toys and games and art and crafts.I have tried FB and Instagram and although I do get traffic I have no conversions. Am I too Broad?
 
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 Chris says at 07:18 et
Sallyann, no offense but it looks like it's made in 1999 on old school iframes from pagemaker. You need to update to one of the modern shopify templates. Check the themes store, they have a beutiful (even some free) themes there for outdoor!
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Sallyann says at 07:32 et
I am not taking offence I kind of knew this but before i discovered SLHC i followed other courses. This is the trouble when you don't know what you are doing at the beginning and you go blindly into things. I am grateful for all your comments and i am going to take every one of them on board and try to make the whole thing look a lot more professional.
Thank you all
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 Alice says at 07:19 et
Check for grammar issues. example "Stressed? Take a look at our stressbusters here at Shoppinginspirations. with camping, " seems off
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Mr.A. says at 07:20 et
The prices are in pounds but I look from Austria, it's strange to me. Do you ship outside UK? Not very clear
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Julian says at 07:21 et
The store lacks direction, it looks very generic... A mix of pregnant woman, flash lights for hikers? How is it even related. Toys, then tactical backpack? It looks like a bunch of unrelated ideas stuffed together.
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Mike says at 07:22 et
About US lacks the contact info
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 jo says at 07:23 et
Logo needs to be re-done. You can get on 99designs or if funds are limited, on fiverr.com some great logo makers
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Mike says at 07:27 et
My tip to you, start from scratch! You clearly started wrong before watched the course, so it might be great idea to start all over.

1. Choose one direction and go for it. No need to mix mommies and camping equipment.

2. Choose professional theme from shopify theme store.

3. Hire a coder/designer on fiver or odesk to help you put it all together quickly if you lack those coding skills

Like if you go for child/nursery products, make sure the title of the shop is related to it and you pose as a "passionate mom and expert in baby products", build the community and trust around it!

4. See successful stores from your competitors and copy their top selling products so you have something similar and know what sells.

5. Build solid credibility following the video lesson how to build trust.

Hope it helps! Cheers!
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Elena76 says at 07:28 et
Customer Reviews are empty on products it gives away the "dead site" feeling. Prefill some with reviews
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 wing11 says at 07:30 et
Good luck! great tips guys gave here! hopefully it helps! my tip - dont call the store generic name or your personal name. It must be related to your brand. See the video about choosing the brand name!
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Original Swarovski crystals necklace!
Original Swarovski crystals Cheap prices! Handmade art!
Keywords: Swarovski crystals
chris says at 09:51 am et
I help my wife who is Swarovski crystal artist with her shopify store and etsy to run some facebook ads but struggling to make them work for me. Any tips? Thank you guys, love all the help!
 
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 victoria says at 09:52 et
hi Chris. Thank you for your courage to submit to critics! I have some respectful tips for you. First of all the ad itself is very dull, it must pop out when people scroll the newsfeed!
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 jack says at 09:52 et
Try to get REAL WOMAN to wear the necklace, this will make a DIFFERENCE!
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 chris says at 09:56 et
Great thinking, thank you for the tips!!
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Jonas says at 09:53 et
Don't say "Cheap prices"! This makes you look cheap. Try instead "$150 OFF" or "Special Sale Today!" or "Get free just pay for shipping"
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JO says at 09:53 et
It lacks call to action! Add a button.
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Rob says at 09:54 et
I would suggest to check by Facebook text overlay tool - seems you have too much text and it does not show well in ads! FB HATS too much text
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 Claudia says at 09:55 et
Chris, you need to pre-heat your traffic first. Such ad is only good for re-targeting. If you are selling to COLD traffic you must pre-heat it first. See our video about FB ads Mastery (Bonus) how to do it!
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 chris says at 09:55 et
oh I missed that. will do thank you!!!!!
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Iriness says at 09:55 et
I would do a video showcasing your wife doing it hand made to add extra value!
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 chris says at 09:56 et
Ok I will do a video, good point!
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 chris says at 09:56 et
thank you for the tips my friends, really appreciated!!!!!!
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OUFO Necklace Earring Ring Fashion Jewelry sets
OUFO beautiful jewelry is definitely your flattering decoration for daily dress up or special occasions, which highlight your beauty greatly! The good choice for gift or decration. We have our own factory to ensure our items' plating and the strict criteria of the plating thickness. The physical characteristics of human require us to adopt a higher standar of plating process. At the same time, OUFO FASHION JEWELRY create a good condition to reduce production cost while maintain high qualityof our item.
Qqq2 says at 09:21 am et
What do you think of my ad?

Big Discount-- 50% OFF
Promotion Price:4.49 $ ( US ONLY)
All FBA Delivery !!!
3 Color :lake blue ?dark green? purple
Don't need review, just do promotion.
If you are interested in this product. .
only 5 left, US only.
 
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 Victor says at 09:22 et
Work on your spellchecking.. the punctuation and typos make you look amateur.
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 David says at 09:22 et
"The necklace broke right away, not the greatest quality." answer your bad reviews and show that you care
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 Theo says at 09:23 et
$ should be before the price. fix the spacing and grammar.
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 Amelia says at 09:23 et
I like your bulletpoints and the photos. Great work on that part!
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Qqq2 says at 09:26 et
thank you !!!
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Bill says at 09:25 et
Your last photo has chinese text on it and it kills your credibility and US-ONLY story... See http://prntscr.com/ebgxtw and fix it!
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Qqq2 says at 09:26 et
oops.. thank you much so!
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 Alice says at 09:27 et
We know you are chinese but put little more effort into your English and proofread your description. It is terrible. Hire a proofreader on FIVER for $5! " The good choice for gift or decration" decration??? lol
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 Claudia says at 09:34 et
Get more reviews and run a promotion. you have just 3 reviews
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PCdogclothing
At PC Dog, our complete small dog clothing line is proudly made in the USA. Our items are made to fit small breeds of dogs. When buying for your dog, please measure around the chest behind the front legs, and order accordingly. We hope you enjoy your experience here with our online store!
Violet says at 08:56 pm et
Wondering if you guys and take a look at my store. Store Feedback please? http://pcdogclothing.com/ all suggestions are highly appreciated guys! The store is running on Shopify. I really need to get this to start generating more income.
 
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CltrAlt says at 20:46 et
Oh my god Violet. Sorry it looks really ugly and outdated, hello from 1997? Shopify gives you so many free themes, get a fresh look right away!!
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casey says at 20:46 et
I agree with above... Your site looks right from the past century.
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 Violet says at 20:48 et
Sorry I am not very good with Graphic Design.
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 chris says at 20:46 et
Remove that ugly Paypal banner on top. It looks like an ad from adsense and brings no value
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 Chris says at 20:46 et
Main popup appears too soon. Add 30 second delay and do a face lift, so many great looking apps for popup!
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swifty says at 20:46 et
Menu makes no sense.. I hover over "NEW ITEMS" and it shows the sub menu saying again "NEW ITEMS" LOL.
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 Violet says at 20:51 et
I am not very good in coding...
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 Rob says at 20:46 et
Remove the ugly watermark from your images. I bet you took them from aliexpress anyways so why put watermark? It just does not look professional, no shop these days uses watermark like that.
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 Violet says at 20:49 et
No way! Our small dog clothing line is proudly made in the USA
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 jack says at 20:47 et
The name itself is questionable.. PC Dog?? What is the relation between dog and PC? The name and the messaging have anything to do with each other.
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 lou says at 20:47 et
Congrats on getting started, the first few months are full of learning, dont expect massive sales too soon, keep learning!
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 Alice says at 20:47 et
Discounts are laughable.. NOW $15.99 WAS $16.99 You discount 1 dollar LOL! Discount more by putting "BEFORE" price much higher, at least 2 times higher
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 Emili says at 20:47 et
The header image is over compressed. Reduce compressing. Remove the side background with paws.. WE GET IT, it's a dog shop. no need to scream into the face.
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mya says at 20:47 et
No upsells again? Seems everyone is missing out on providing upsells..
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 little_tiger says at 20:48 et
People usually have questions before buying stuff. Make sure FAQ is solid!
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 little_tiger says at 20:48 et
Where is social proof? Site looks dead, where are reviews, facebook, social media, instagram? Seems the website froze in time..
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 Dylan says at 20:50 et
Reduce the delivery time.. Try DHL, i pass the cost to the consumer, i find consumer will pay the xtra amount to get the instant gratification they seek in online shopping.. Or find domestic suppliers..
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Jeff says at 20:50 et
It is Ok to use AlieExpress - just make sure that your customers know about the delivery times and the reason is because all products are made to order and direct from the factory.
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 Violet says at 20:51 et
we ARE producing ourselves!
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 Violet says at 20:51 et
What should I do?
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Alex says at 20:52 et
if you are not good with coding and design, outsource your weaknesses... Hire designer or coder on ODesk or FIVERR to help you get fresh THEME installed and make a fresh make-over. Put old site to trash and start all over with fresh look!
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Eric says at 20:53 et
I agree with Alex, the site screams for a face lift.
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 Violet says at 20:53 et
Thank you for comments, I will try to do that...
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PIKO PENPOINT
PIKO BELIEVES IN THE BEAUTY OF SIMPLICITY PIKO'S MISSION As our lives become more complicated and overloaded with information and technology, our devices need to evolve inversely and become less complicated and more easily accessible. Similarly, in a world where technology has become so abundant, diverse, and so quickly obsolete, we feel there has to be a better, more elegant solution to incorporate these devices into our lives. Piko is here to innovate, and to make your lives easier through technology; all the while, we will remain committed to delivering the highest quality devices that last as well as being environmentally conscious in the process.
swifty says at 08:38 pm et
New to all this but would love to hear your suggestions on the shopify store pikodevices.com ?

WARNING: This is a PENPOINT, not a fallos!
 
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 Uncle Sam says at 20:38 et
The images are over compressed and look pale and dirty.. Especially where it says WIRELESS MOUSE
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swifty says at 20:42 et
Ok I will fix it
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Fadey says at 20:38 et
This image looks like dildo http://prntscr.com/e52cnl Like people say, you will get clicks and disappointed women.. Change the angle of the photo to reduce dildo effect. Again it's over compressed..
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swifty says at 20:41 et
Well we wanted to try this road with facebook ads to stay on the edge side
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Ray says at 20:38 et
It's a mouse? I thought it was something else for a sex.. It's too suggestive..
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Joe says at 20:39 et
This angle http://prntscr.com/e52cyo looks much better, it's more clear that its a pointer not a dildo.. but clean up the torn paper.
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Jeff says at 20:39 et
The header image of girl and a coffee is very boring and does not bring much.. What are you selling? Laptops? Cofee? Not clear at all unless I put a lot of effort in learning about the product.
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 Lane says at 20:39 et
Add VIDEO.. this kind of product best demonstrated with a fun lifestyle video.
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Abigail says at 20:39 et
This looks VERY UGLY http://prntscr.com/e52dhz and does not fit the THEME of the page.. Hire designer to fix it.
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Father says at 20:39 et
No social proof, no reviews... Very boring look, i am not inspired to buy.. The whole site looks like you did not try to put much effort, very templatish and lacks basic things like blog, video, social proof etc..
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 Aria says at 20:39 et
Where are the upsells?? If I buy "PP0 - mouse only" why not upsell magnetic stand, presenter mouse etc??
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 Samuel says at 20:39 et
Your store lacks credibility.. ABOUT US has no address, what is your location even? Where do you ship from? Free shipping? But how long? Do you dropship or manufacture? All not clear.
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emma says at 20:40 et
You offer 3 options but which one is the best?? Put it as BEST CHOICE.. HOPE IT HELPS! Good luck!
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swifty says at 20:41 et
Thank you all for the feedback!
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Espresso Machine Experts
Be Your Own Barista Welcome to Espresso Machine Experts Espresso Machine Experts is committed to providing the products and services to help the home barista achieve the perfect espresso at home or the office.
Keywords: Espresso Machine
Midas says at 08:30 pm et
we launched redesigned website this weekend. For anyone who has time to check it out I would love your feedback, insight! espresso-experts.com
 
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 lou says at 20:30 et
Looks great.. some of the images are of poor resolution, especially near "Your machine is an investment."
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Olga says at 20:30 et
FOMO app is too anoying, increase the delay of the popup!
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Midas says at 20:32 et
thank you Olga
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Alabama says at 20:30 et
WAY TOO MANY bars and banners on top.. Red, white, black, then white again.. totall mess and the attention is lose.. FInd your priorities.
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jo says at 20:30 et
You are missing reviews and social proof. I see empty reviews and make conclusions that nobody is buying? add more social proof! "Customer Reviews No reviews yet "
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Jeff says at 20:33 et
write at least 2-3 reviews yourself else it looks like nobody is buying your stuff, empty reviews is a no-go
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 Lane says at 20:33 et
Then reviews will grow eventually... But nobody will write real review if there are NO reviews at all. People are afraid to be first.
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Natalie says at 20:31 et
Increase your optin rates by changing boring old-schoole "NEWS AND UPDATES" to something more exciting, like "enter your email to get a chance to win a free..."
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 David says at 20:31 et
Where are the UPSELLS??? if I am buying some coffee machine Baristo for $1725 why not offer me to buy SERVICE or at least some cofee beans??
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 Alice says at 20:31 et
I hope you are using abandonment cart app, because if you lose someone you miss a lot of $$.
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 Dylan says at 20:31 et
Images are too heavy, try image optimizer shopify APP to fix them and make them load faster . HOPE THIS HELPS!
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 lou says at 20:31 et
You are obviously in US but do you ship internationally? Not clear! Make sure delivery time is clear. Good luck, i like your store, your products and ABOUT page!
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Midas says at 20:32 et
thank you Lou!
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 Lane says at 20:31 et
and now i got your retargeting ads lol. Well done! Always use RETARGETING APP!
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Midas says at 20:32 et
It's working really well for me
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30" Superlative Mosquito Craft RC Flying Fish II Speed Boat Electric Radio Remote Control Racing Ship
30" Superlative Mosquito Craft RC Flying Fish II Speed Boat Electric Radio Remote Control Racing Ship - Full Function Radio Control Boat (forward, left and right turning) - Perfect for pools, small ponds, rivers and lakes - Twin 380 Type High Speed Racing Motors - Polycarbonate Hull - Professional Large Torsion Propellers - Twin Propeller Design With Metal Shafts - Prof. Designed Propeller - Prof. Hi-Capacity Rechargeable Battery - Time and Hi-Speed Race - Factory assembled and painted - Vector-Push Design, Easy To Be Controlled - Range: Approx. 600 feet - Maximum Speed: 25mph - Dimension: 30"L x 9"W x 4.5"H
  • Full Function Radio Control Boat (forward, left and right turning)
  • Detailed Interior & Exterior, Super tough, solid construction
  • Durable Metal Actuating Mechanism, Powered by twin motors
  • "Touch water to run" safety function
  • Factory pre-assembled ready to run, RTR
Keywords: Craft RC
max says at 08:22 pm et
I am doing Amazon selling and working with chinese manufactures for 8 years but struggling to get my sales to the next level.. we sell different toys, remote control toys etc.. Any suggestions? Thank you!
 
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 Lane says at 20:22 et
Max... You are overpricing it.. Not sure if you are dropshipping or not, but you are charing 75 usd for a toy that costs 15 at best on aliexpress..
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henry says at 20:22 et
Very poor image. See how well your competitors do the images.. Search asin B018EMK81G and related to it. Or get white background.
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CltrAlt says at 20:22 et
VERY LAZY.. Literary just 1 single foto and poor quality too.
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max says at 20:23 et
sorry I have so many toys to market, could not get more photos...
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 Claudia says at 20:23 et
Why do you have to spread so thin??? Concentrate on the winner and ditch the rest. That's your problem, you have too many products and put so little effort into each one.
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Wolf says at 20:24 et
You fail to explain your product on so many levels. " Powered by twin motors".. What batteries are needed? Are they included or not??
Come on!
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James says at 20:24 et
"Touch water to run" safety function - what does it even mean?
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 Gab says at 20:24 et
I actually have a client who had the same problem. You need to put more effort into marketing and the message.. It is not easy - but you need a unique selling proposition.
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 Uncle Sam says at 20:25 et
The product quality is bad too. "My overall rating of this toy is low, because of the lack of construction quality and durability. There is no hole or crack in the boat, but within 10 minutes of use it starts to fill up with water (about half a cup worth), "
Have you talked to the supplier? I would suggest to change the supplier and re-launch.
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max says at 20:26 et
Yes we manufacture them but some of the reviews are old.. Now quality is much better!
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emma says at 20:26 et
You need to re-launch and get fresh reviews.. Those bad reviews from 5 years ago are holding you back
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 Kylie says at 20:25 et
HERE IS MY TODO LIST FOR YOU TO IMROVE:
1. Get a quality sample and do a fotography. Main one with a white background and 3-4 lifestyle fotos
2. Extra photo on how to use it, what is in the package, how remote control looks.
3. Rework your bulletpoints, see the video about coffee mugs from the SLHC course..
4. Explain if we need a battery, is it included?
5. Analyze your competitors. Your listing lacks on so many levels comparing to all competitors.
6. Your reviews date to 2011. Get fresh reviews and relaunch again this year with a new listings.
In short, it's not clear what sets your toy apart and WHY shoppers should buy from you.
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max says at 20:25 et
Thanks Kylie, very helpful indeed!
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Ceramic Coffee Mug Cup 11oz White HOLD YOUR WIFE'S HAND FUNNY ROMANTIC HUMOR
Ceramic Coffee Mug Standard Size (11oz) Image is printed on both sides High Quality Perfect gift for any occasion We also do custom mugs for any occasion Satisfaction Guaranteed! If package gets returned due to wrong address, buyer will be responsible for the additional shipping charges. Thanks for Looking!!!
  • Ceramic Coffee Mug Cup HOLD YOUR WIFE'S HAND Perfect Gift
  • Color: White
  • Size: 11oz
Keywords: coffee mug
Alabama says at 05:34 pm et
Whatsup bros!! Care to roast my coffee mugs? Thanks for the feedback in advance!!
 
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 Claudia says at 17:26 et
hi Alabama .. Your main image should have white background. All your competitors mugs have white one and yours look bad against them with a dirty background like that.
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Joe says at 17:26 et
Its a pretty weird message for a pure fun mug, but I like the overall look of it. You are in an extremely competitive market and just advertising a bit won't take the business off.
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 Gab says at 17:26 et
Why TWO fotos only?? Be more creative, get some lifestyle pics.. Happy family? Your wife smiling?
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 Alice says at 17:26 et
WHERE IS ALL ROMANCE?? I like the message but it's done really formal and boring way. I would replace with better design.
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Jordan says at 17:27 et
I'm not sure who your target customer is and seems you are not sure too.. Is it a gift ? To your friend? Not sure..
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Alabama says at 17:30 et
I had my pal in mind when creating a message.. they love shopping that much!
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Alabama says at 17:30 et
I mean her wife loves shopping..
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Rob says at 17:27 et
The Title looks messy. Part in low case, other part in CAPS..
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bigbigstar says at 17:27 et
I checked your other products and ALL of them are struggling of the poor fotography. You got to invest into your designer and photographer if you have no skills and taste in that area.
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Alabama says at 17:30 et
Ok i did not realize my fotography sucks that much. .. thanks for honesty!!
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Eric says at 17:27 et
You went really lazy on your bulletpoins and description.. My suggestion is to stop being so lazy and get to work on your marketing.
Overall, poor product, poor lazy listng, no reviews.. and I bet you have no sales.
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GoldmaN says at 17:27 et
LAZY. Lazy fotos, lazy listings.. Lazy foto.. Lazy product too. You are not taking your business seriously if you put so small effort in everything you do. GET TO WORK else you will not succeed with this.
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Alabama says at 17:30 et
Point taken.. Thanks!
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rick says at 17:27 et
I would change your photos out to make it more appealing.
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Alabama says at 17:30 et
thanks for honesty bros!! Really appreciated all the comments here!
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 Violet says at 20:54 et
Your message is not very romantic, Alabama...
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PATCHWORK BEAR
At The Patchwork Bear®, we believe your clothes- like photos, songs and even smells, bring back memories of special times: bringing baby home, first day of school, game winning jersey, birthdays, weddings... they are special. Let us capture these memories and turn them into keepsake bears, puppies, bags & quilts.
Alice says at 05:34 pm et
Please ROAST!!! GIVE ME THE UGLY TRUTH! I can take it! thepatchworkbear.com how to increase the sales?
 
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 Claudia says at 17:34 et
hi Alice.. Great project.. Some issues with the header image.. It seems located too low, looks like it's stuck to the brown line below it..
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 David says at 17:35 et
Have you used Lucky Orange to determine what's happening to traffic? It will give you a great idea to start where you lose the traffic.
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 Alice says at 17:38 et
Is that for Shopify app? I will check thank you
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will says at 17:35 et
When i click on "peek your studio" on the main slideshow, i am redirected to YOUTUBE. BIG MISTAKE! Never lose your traffic to youtube! Instead link it to your blog and EMBEDD the video there!
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Mila says at 17:35 et
Spelling mistakes on the about us don't help..
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 Alice says at 17:38 et
Care to clarify Mila?
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 Evan says at 17:35 et
From the stats.. i see people come to the store, add the product to the cart, but pull out when they see a shipping fee.. So Install proper abandoned cart app, you can capture those who add to cart e-mails and capture those sales!
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freedom says at 17:35 et
Why no featured or special deals on the main page?? Big miss.
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Rose says at 17:35 et
I think your site looks great, but two things throw me off right away. No trust seals, no info on international delivery!
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 Chris says at 17:35 et
Yeah, maybe some trust badges?! Won't hurt!
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emma says at 17:36 et
Worst pop up I have seen..intrusive and missing the point. Get rid of it.
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 victoria says at 17:36 et
Prices are way too high.. 60-150 usd for a plush bear? I dont know..
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 Alice says at 17:38 et
They are HANDMADE, my friend...
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Cameron says at 17:36 et
handmade? But i would put up a product video showing your quality on the front page.
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 Rob says at 17:38 et
No upsells again. Why not offer related products? There is upsells, no calls to action - you're missing some fundamentals to the conversion funnel process.
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freedom says at 17:38 et
Your FAQ page is empty.. make sure you fill the pages or remove the links. Your story could use refining. Fix the typos too
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 Ted says at 17:38 et
"Patchwork Bear is a celebrity favorite- seen with Jessica Alba, Jennifer Garner, Eli Manning and more" - you are not marketing this enough. I would SCREAM about it everywhere on the main page.. You put that deep down in "why us" and it's hard to find.
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 Kylie says at 17:38 et
Facebook page does not seem very active, no interactions or engagement. Work better on your facebook strategy to get likes and shares.
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Tycoon says at 17:38 et
No reviews, no list collection popups.. How will you grow your fan base if you dont build the list?
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 Alice says at 17:40 et
Ok I will put the reviews, we have many happy customers actually!
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Nick says at 17:39 et
I am in UK and US$ and this is also a problem You must put a currency converter!
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 Alice says at 17:40 et
We usually sell in US
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Alabama says at 17:39 et
Your return policy is not clear! Do you think it's good for your business?
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Mila says at 17:39 et
I agree with all of people above, you go to the site yah, looks beautiful but there is no incentive for me to sign-up or buy! No call to action!
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 Alice says at 17:40 et
WOW Great feedback!! Thank you for brainstorming!!!!!
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Dinky Dog Club
SHOP OUR SELECTION OF ADORABLE SMALL DOG CLOTHES, GREAT FITTING SMALL DOG HARNESSES AND OTHER FUN AND ESSENTIAL SMALL DOG ACCESSORIES. FUN DOGGY PAJAMAS, STYLISH DOG CARRIERS AND SUPER CUTE SMALL DOG TOYS, EVERYTHING WE CARRY IS SIZED JUST FOR SMALL BREED DOGS. FOR THE BALL CRAZY DOG, CHECK OUT IFETCH. PROTECT YOUR FURNITURE AND CARPETS WITH DOGGY DIAPERS. YOUR PUP WILL BE A HIT ON INSTAGRAM SPORTING SOMETHING FROM OUR UNIQUE COLLECTION OF SMALL DOG CLOTHES. OUR CUSTOMER SERVICE IS SURE TO MAKE YOU SMILE AND YOUR LITTLE DOG’S TAIL WAG. HAPPY SHOPPING!
Amelia says at 05:24 pm et
Hi guys, I am new here and LOVE all the info you provide... I am doing a dog store and would love to hear the critics and your feedback please. dinkydogclub.com Any ideas on what i can do to improve store would really help. Thanks.
 
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 David says at 17:17 et
hi Amelia.. I love dogs too! Suggestions.. The middle of the website has text all in CAPS in ugly bold font that is hard to read. CAPS is a no-no..
Dont SCREAM at your customers!
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 Amelia says at 17:22 et
oops.. I did not know CAPS ARE SCREAMING!! SORRY!!!!
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Gus says at 17:17 et
The top header image with a dog in a vest is poorly positioned, when i scroll the logo covers the dog face. Make sure you crop the image better to avoid that.
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Bill says at 17:18 et
Just my honest opinion, the price is kinda steep
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 Amelia says at 17:22 et
Well.. I dropship from Ali..
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 Claudia says at 17:22 et
Try to find local supplier.. Very easy in the DOG niche, just visit the dog trade shows, dog related fairs etc
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 Lucy says at 17:18 et
I love the fact that you go niche-specific here, targeting small dogs only. Good call.
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mya says at 17:18 et
Work more on your product images.. THe bow tie looks TOO BIG comparing to other images, it creates a MESSY look.. http://prntscr.com/e3qp8s see what i mean
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 Amelia says at 17:21 et
thank you for your suggestions!
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 Gab says at 17:18 et
TOO MANY products on the front page.. Put just best deals there not ALL your products! I am lost!
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 Ted says at 17:18 et
Where are the UPSELLS?? you are missing whole point by not providing any upsells after I added the product to cart to rise the value of the order!! Make sure to add upsell apps! Smart7 bundle upsell app for example for shopify works GREAT!
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Nick says at 17:18 et
Have you thought about REtargeting ads? It will really help you!
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 Amelia says at 17:21 et
never thought of it.. good call, will try! THX!
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 Kylie says at 17:18 et
Why should we trust your shop? Credibility is not there.. About us and COntact us has no specific info, no address, no contact information, just a website form!
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 Amelia says at 17:23 et
thank you for your suggestions! I will add more info
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 Amelia says at 17:23 et
Thank you all for your suggestions! Great ideas here.. Will work on them!
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Very good
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